The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
chart provides information about how the number
of closing shops and the number
of new shops in a nation from 2011 to 2018.
The number
of store terminations fluctuated significantly during the periods shown. On the other hand
, the number
of stores
opened slightly increased and decreased.
Looking at the information in more detail, in 2011, the number
of closed stores
was generally less than the number
of opened stores
. The figure for closing stores
was about 6,300 and the figure for opening stores
was about 8,500. A year later, in 2012, the number
of opening stores
dropped, while
the number
of closing stores
exceeded.
Since then
, in 2015, the number
of closed stores
dropped to only 500, while
the gap in the number
of open stores
reached 3,500. Although
the number
of store closures was very low in 2015, it exceeded the number
of new store openings the following year.Submitted by CheeseCiao on
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