At the present time, populations of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages whats ypur opinion?
In the present world, some countries has a population which is majorly young. If
this
man power is used in a right way then
it would be very beneficial for the economic growth of the nation. However
, if this
is not managed properly then
it will lead to poverty, unemployment problems. This
essay will discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of the country that has a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Firstly
, one of the prime benefit of a generation which is not old is that with proper educational support, the country can use these adults to build world class technology, military, and infrastructure. The number of individuals working would be on upsurge so do the GDP. For Example
: An article published by The Hindu, mentions that India's 30% of the citizens are below 20 years old. Therefore
Government is focusing on education in engineering, medical, science field for it to become a technology, mnufacturing and research hub . Also
, not only military personal whose ages are between 15-30 has grown. But also
, India is now the 3rd highest economy.
However
, there are also
few disadvantages if this
teenagers are not given right educational support and if there is no employment generated then
this
can push the country into poverty. It can also
force individuals to indulge in crimes. For instance
: South African countries have teenagers who don't have access to schools or college, and also
no proper jobs are available for them. Therefore
, crimes, unemployment rate, hunger, and poverty are at it's peak. This
has forced them to do robbery, murder, and terrorist attacks just for a few thousand dollars.
In conclusion, of course in the above case the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. With correct decisions and policies formed the young human resource can be used as a tool for development.Submitted by yashaswikhot on
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Ensure subject-verb agreement is correct throughout the essay. For example, 'some countries has' should be 'some countries have.'
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Elaborate more on the advantages and disadvantages with additional specific examples and deeper analysis.
coherence and cohesion
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coherence and cohesion
Avoid grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'if this man power is used in a right way' should be 'if this manpower is used in the right way.'
coherence and cohesion
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You provide relevant examples to support your points, such as the reference to India's youthful population and South African countries.
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