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The graph below gives information about the quantities of good transported by six different mode of transport in the USA since 1990 with projections until 2024.

The graph below gives information about the quantities of good transported by six different mode of transport in the USA since 1990 with projections until 2024.
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The line graphs illustrate the information about a number of
goods
, which were transported by different modes in the USA since 1990 and previsions for 2040.
Overall
, it is apparent that the most popular mode of transportation was occupied by road, rising from 35 billion
tons
 to 48
million
tons
 in 1990 to just above 40
million
tons
 in 2024, despite there
was
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 some fluctuation between 1990 and 2010.
Additionally
, a significant increase is shown and anticipated to continue, reaching 48
million
tons
 in 2040. The quantities of
goods
 transported by water and railway are nearly the same pattern over the given period, starting from 20
million
tons
 and 15
million
tons
, respectively in 1990.
While
 waters showed an initial fall, the railway presented a gradual incline, with the two modes equal between 1995 and 2000. The quantities have fluctuated since 2000, but two modes were used to transport
goods
 around 23
million
tons
 in 2015.
Moreover
, the transport of
goods
 by railway is expected to rise substantially to 32
million
tons
 in 2040.
In contrast
, water is forecast to remain stable at 25
million
tons
 till the end of the given period. In 1990, air, pipelined and cable were the least used, with only 4
million
tons
. The quantities of
goods
 which are transported by air are projected to rise by 3
million
tons
 in 2035,and pipelined by 1
million
tons
. Since 2015 cable fell to the 1990 figures, and it is expected to remain constant through 2024,
while
 remains will gradually increase after 2035.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, tons, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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