The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart provides information about the main exports of Southland which are international tourism, dairy

products

and meat

products

in 2000, and 2024, and includes projections for the future in 2005.

Overall

, the chart has some fluctuated. It is apparent that tourism is on an upward trend.

Nevertheless

, Milk

products

and Meat

products

are different compared to international travelling.

Firstly

, In 2000 international tourism is the highest figure was about almost 8

billion

pounds

. The second-ranked is milk

products

was 7

billion

pounds

and butcher

products

have the lowest number

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just 6

billion

pounds

consecutively. In 2024 which is a current year, there was a significant change in milk goods figure compared to 2000. There is about 10

billion

pounds

in 2024. International travelling

also

gradually increased to 9

billion

pounds

in 2024.

On the other hand

, the butcher

products

declined slightly from 7

billion

pounds

to 5.5

pounds

in 2024. In the future, Dairy and meat

products

figures will decline slightly by about 0.5

billion

pounds

. In contradiction, foreign travelling is the only business that increased in the figure was around 10

billion

pounds

. To summarise, the tourist business is the only business

that is

on an upward trend compared to dairy goods, which have fluctuating numbers.

Last

, butchery is on a downward trend.

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