The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000,*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summaerise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart provides information about the main exports of Southland which are international tourism, dairy
products
and meat products
in 2000, and 2024, and includes projections for the future in 2005. Overall
, the chart has some fluctuated. It is apparent that tourism is on an upward trend. Nevertheless
, Milk products
and Meat products
are different compared to international travelling.
Firstly
, In 2000 international tourism is the highest figure was about almost 8 billion
pounds
. The second-ranked is milk products
was 7 billion
pounds
and butcher products
have the lowest number was
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billion
pounds
consecutively.
In 2024 which is a current year, there was a significant change in milk goods figure compared to 2000. There is about 10 billion
pounds
in 2024. International travelling also
gradually increased to 9 billion
pounds
in 2024. On the other hand
, the butcher products
declined slightly from 7 billion
pounds
to 5.5 pounds
in 2024. In the future, Dairy and meat products
figures will decline slightly by about 0.5 billion
pounds
. In contradiction, foreign travelling is the only business that increased in the figure was around 10 billion
pounds
.
To summarise, the tourist business is the only business that is
on an upward trend compared to dairy goods, which have fluctuating numbers. Last
, butchery is on a downward trend.Submitted by matty10
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