Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include Where you live The problem What he should do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about a noise issue in your Roxy complex's apartments.
I live in apartment number W23563 in the Roxy complex on the 2nd floor. I have been living there since 200. I appreciate the stunning service you provided us.
However
, on behalf of the other flatmate, I want to draw your attention towards the noise problem. It's been happening since last
week. Some people do overnight parties every day and play loud music. While
loud music is restricted after 10 pm, they openly play till midnight. The majority of working people live there. So they need peaceful nights for their demanding job. However
, people are angry with noisy nights.
I would recommend you take serious action by imposing fines. Also
, there would be security to control this
situation after 10 pm. These strict actions could improve the current situation.
Thank you for hearing me out.
Regards,
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task achievement
Consider revising certain phrases to improve clarity and formal tone, such as changing 'Some people do overnight parties' to 'Some residents host late-night parties'.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph covers a single clear idea, reinforcing the main complaint and suggested solutions.
greeting and closing
The letter begins with a clear and appropriate greeting and closing, which is important in formal letters.
logical structure
The complaint is well-structured with clear sections for each necessary aspect of the issue.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite