The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago, and how it appears now. Summarize the information, report the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago, and how it appears now. Summarize the information, report the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the changes in a public library, especially the floor plan and what has changed in 20
years
. It can be seen that major changes have been made over the
years
, one of them is the
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of the enquiry desk, which is now turned into a cafe,
also
the reading
room
from 20
years
ago has become a computer
room
.
Whereas
the tables and chairs have been removed,
however
, self-service machines and sofas have been added over the
years
. Meanwhile, in today's central
library
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there can be found storytelling events which are in front of the children's fiction books section.
Also
, the
room
where 20
years
ago was supposed to be the children's books has now turned into a lecture
room
.
In addition
, there is a section for all reference books that
has
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been introduced in today's floor plan
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