The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates forested

area

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areas

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in different countries including ( Africa, Asia, Europe, North

America

, Oceania, and South

America

) in 15 years.

land

measured by millions of hectares.

Overall

, the most of forest lands of the countries

reduced

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over the entire

period

However

, Europe's forest

land

increased gradually, and Asia increased slightly over the given

period

. Europe had the biggest forested

land

over the entire

period

with 989 in 1990 and increased slightly to 998 in 2000,

then

grew to 1001 in the

last

year. South

America

had the second biggest

area

in 1990 with 946

millions

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hectares, before dropping to 882 in 2005 and

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the third biggest

area

While

Africa had forested space about 749 in the first year

then

dropped to just 691 in 2005 and became the second lowest

land

. North

America

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forested

land

was between 708 to 705 respectively over the given

period

Asia

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Asia's

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forest

area

increased gradually from 576 in 1990 to 584 in 2005. Both North

America

and Oceania decreased slightly from 708 to 705 and from 199 to 197 respectively.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Hectares
Forested land
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Historical data
Deforestation
Urbanization
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