The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates forested
area
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areas
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in different countries including ( Africa, Asia, Europe, North
America
, Oceania, and South
America
) in 15 years.
land
measured by millions of hectares.
Overall
, the most of forest lands of the countries
reduced
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over the entire
period
.
However
, Europe's forest
land
increased gradually, and Asia increased slightly over the given
period
. Europe had the biggest forested
land
over the entire
period
with 989 in 1990 and increased slightly to 998 in 2000,
then
grew to 1001 in the
last
year. South
America
had the second biggest
area
in 1990 with 946
millions
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of
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hectares, before dropping to 882 in 2005 and
became
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the third biggest
area
.
While
Africa had forested space about 749 in the first year
then
dropped to just 691 in 2005 and became the second lowest
land
. North
America
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forested
land
was between 708 to 705 respectively over the given
period
.
Asia
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Asia's
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forest
area
increased gradually from 576 in 1990 to 584 in 2005. Both North
America
and Oceania decreased slightly from 708 to 705 and from 199 to 197 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, america, land, period with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectares
  • Forested land
  • Regions
  • Distribution
  • Trends
  • Historical data
  • Deforestation
  • Urbanization
  • Outliers
  • Proportionately
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