The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps depict an
island
, illustrating its appearance before and after the development of various tourist facilities.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from an uninhabited island
to a predominantly touristic landscape.
Before the construction of the new facilities, the island
was just a wasteland with no anthropogenic factors. For example
, there were some palms, plenty of sand, and a beach, and that’s all. However
, after human influence on the island
, it was transformed into a tourist destination. For instance
, fifteen accommodations with footpaths between them, one reception, one restaurant, one pier, and a swimming zone appeared on the island
.
Interestingly, all of the trees on the island
remained. Human activity did not destroy the natural beauty of the island
but improved it by urbanizing.Submitted by dnm.best on
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