The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of

some tourist facilities.
The two maps depict an
island
, illustrating its appearance before and after the development of various tourist facilities.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from an uninhabited
island
to a predominantly touristic landscape. Before the construction of the new facilities, the
island
was just a wasteland with no anthropogenic factors.
For example
, there were some palms, plenty of sand, and a beach, and that’s all.
However
, after human influence on the
island
, it was transformed into a tourist destination.
For instance
, fifteen accommodations with footpaths between them, one reception, one restaurant, one pier, and a swimming zone appeared on the
island
. Interestingly, all of the trees on the
island
remained. Human activity did not destroy the natural beauty of the
island
but improved it by urbanizing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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