The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the world
sales
in
different types of Change preposition
of
games
in billions of dollars from 2000 to 2006.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that handheld games
have the most sales
. Additionally
, online games
and mobile phone games
increased their sales
every year
, while
console game sales
deacreased
.
In 2000, Handheld Correct your spelling
decreased
games
was
in Change the verb form
were
the
first place in Correct article usage
apply
sales
at just under 12 billion
dollors
and it increased every Correct your spelling
dollars
year
and reached approximately 15 billion
dollors
in the years 2004 and 2005. Correct your spelling
dollars
This
aspect took the peak point at about 18 billion
in 2006. However
, console games
was
at 6 Change the verb form
were
billion
dollors
Correct your spelling
dollars
Change preposition
in sale
sale
in 2000 , following that, fell Fix the agreement mistake
sales
down
slightly every Change preposition
apply
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
year
and stay
at around 4 Wrong verb form
stayed
billion
dollors
in 2003 and 2004. But it Correct your spelling
dollars
contuenied
decline and reached Correct your spelling
continued
contained
minimum
Correct article usage
the minimum
poin
in 2006 at roughly 3 Correct your spelling
point
billion
dollors
.
Correct your spelling
dollars
Moreover
, online games
and cellphone games
were not in the year
2000 and
Correct word choice
apply
this
appeares
in the Correct your spelling
appears
appeared
years
2001 at just under 1 Fix the agreement mistake
year
billion
and in 2002 at just above 1 billion
dollors
, respectively. Correct your spelling
dollars
Finally
, their highest point at 2006 at approximately 8 billion
dollors
.Correct your spelling
dollars
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