The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

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valuation

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of stocks of four major tech corporations i.e.,

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, Google,

Appple

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Apple

and

Yahoo

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, over the span of 5

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.

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, the

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values of two technology companies, Apple and

Facebook

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were highest in 2012 and 2016 respectively.

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the share

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of Google was

lowest

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the lowest

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yet consistent throughout the

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mentioned,

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, the

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value

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of

Yahoo

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kept on declining after 2011. In the initial

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highest valuations in the

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market

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were captured by two major

tech oriented

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company

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companies

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i.e.,

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and

Yahoo

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with

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apply

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share prices of

5,000

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and 11,000 respectively,

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the share

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of

Facebook

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increased by 10,500 approximately in 2012 and

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trend continued till 2016 with a

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of around 19,000,

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the

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value

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of

Yahoo

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declined throughout the

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.

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valuation

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of Google's

stock

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price

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remained constant and

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pattern remained

same

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the same

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till 2016 with a

stock

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price

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of around 1,000,

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, the major

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capture in 2012 was of Apple's

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price

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, as Apple noted a remarkable surge in the

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of their

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with a

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of more than 30,000 which was the highest among all other corporations.