The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the habit of drinking in five cities, Sydney, Melbourne,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and Hobart in Australia. At the same time, the vertical axis represents the
percentage
of city residents.
Overall
,
this
chart has three different drinking habits, buying fresh
coffee
, purchasing instant
coffee
, and going to a café for
coffee
or tea in the
last
4 weeks.
In addition
, the
percentage
of people visiting
coffee
shops to drink exceeds 50% in these five cities.
In contrast
, buying fresh
coffee
has a lower proportion, and does not surpass 45% in all urban regions.
To begin
with, in Sydney and Melbourne, there is a significant difference between going to a café and other items, approximately accounting for 61% and 63.5%, respectively.
Subsequently
, purchasing instant and fresh
coffee
has a narrow distinction in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
, particularly in
Adelaide
, and the two options roughly have an equivalent
percentage
and constitute 50%.
On the other hand
, the
percentage
of buying fresh
coffee
represents a considerable discrepancy compared to the other two items in
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and Hobart. In
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
, both percentages of purchasing fresh
coffee
only make up about 34%. As for Hobart,
this
percentage
still does not exceed 10%;
however
, it can approximately account for 31%.
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