The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the habit of drinking in five cities, Sydney, Melbourne,
Brisbane
, Adelaide
, and Hobart in Australia. At the same time, the vertical axis represents the percentage
of city residents.
Overall
, this
chart has three different drinking habits, buying fresh coffee
, purchasing instant coffee
, and going to a café for coffee
or tea in the last
4 weeks. In addition
, the percentage
of people visiting coffee
shops to drink exceeds 50% in these five cities. In contrast
, buying fresh coffee
has a lower proportion, and does not surpass 45% in all urban regions.
To begin
with, in Sydney and Melbourne, there is a significant difference between going to a café and other items, approximately accounting for 61% and 63.5%, respectively.
Subsequently
, purchasing instant and fresh coffee
has a narrow distinction in Brisbane
and Adelaide
, particularly in Adelaide
, and the two options roughly have an equivalent percentage
and constitute 50%.
On the other hand
, the percentage
of buying fresh coffee
represents a considerable discrepancy compared to the other two items in Brisbane
, Adelaide
, and Hobart. In Brisbane
and Adelaide
,
both percentages of purchasing fresh coffee
only make up about 34%. As for Hobart, this
percentage
still does not exceed 10%; however
, it can approximately account for 31%.Submitted by daniellin0717 on
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