You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbours,

#area #neighbours #situation #addresses

Dear Neighbours, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am Leo S Karl from your

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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, writing

this

letter to inform you that I am facing some

isssues

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issues

in our shared car parking

that is

located behind

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apply

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our street. The main door in the car

parking

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park

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Wrong verb form

was

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damaged two weeks ago

which

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and

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Verb problem

has

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not replaced yet,

due to

this

lots of people are facing difficulties

to enter

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in entering

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or exit the from the garage. I would like to get it fixed by collecting the appropriate money from all the car owners. I am thinking of upgrading it to automatic doors which

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are

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easy

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accesable

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accessible

for senior citizens and

as well as

others.

Regaring

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Regarding

this

I wanted you to attend the meeting that I have planned on

this

weekend dated on 25th

july

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July

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This

meeting is

venued

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valued

at our society's banquet hall. I hope you understand the situation and present for the meeting. Thank you Yours Faithfully, Leo

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grammar

Make sure to proofread your letter for small grammatical errors such as 'isssues' which should be 'issues', and 'Regaring' which should be 'Regarding'.

content

Elaborate more on the suggestions you have provided and possibly add more details to fully address the issue.

writing tone

Your letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is very appropriate for this context.

structure

Starting and ending the letter appropriately with a proper greeting and closing.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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