The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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of

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on

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the

amount

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of people who visited a Caribbean

island

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from 2010 to 2017.

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, total tourists rose considerably, and those staying on cruise ships increased

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, overtaking

staying

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those staying

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on the

island

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itself, which underwent a more moderate increase.

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with, tourists who stayed on

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island

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staing

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staying

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on cruise ships were approximately 0.7

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in 2010.

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this

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figure doubled and hit 1.5

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in the following two years. During the next two years,

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quantity has remained the same, without any change. The progressive patterns for visitors on cruise ships and the

island

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were reflected in substantial gains for

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visitors, which started at 1

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in 2010, grew consistently to 2.7

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in 2015 before plateauing through 2016 and

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increasing sharply to 3.5

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by the end of the period.