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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words news, coverage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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