The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage.

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The provided table illustrates the proportions of people's

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to three specific questions about famous

news

coverage

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individuals believe that celebrities

shown

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too much in

news

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Moreover

, they believe that

due to

news

organisations,

celebirities

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celebrities

cover media a lot and

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they thought that television

news

are

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makes up the vast majority of

coverage

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think that influencers

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too much in

news

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the news

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with 85%

while

others believe that they

shown

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not enough

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6% before, some argue that they receive enough amount of coveragewith 7%.

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majority of

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argue that

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organisations are the main responsible

about

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this

coverage

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56%

while

other

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36% believe that

due to

the public, celebrities

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shown

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a lot.

Lastly

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percent

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questionnaires

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thought that television

news

gave the most

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some people

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that internet

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websites gave

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coverage

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15%

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who think newspapers gave the most

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with 12%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words news, coverage with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

159 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage.

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