IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

#company #two #years #promotion #boss #achievements #interest
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing
this
 letter to talk regarding the promotion of my current position. First of all, I want to thank you for your support and appreciation during my difficult project
of
Change preposition
for
show examples
 the
company
. As you know I have been working in the
company
 since 2021 and I am in the same position at that time. I handled many tough projects for our
company
 under your guidance.
For example
, In 2021 after my six months in
company
Add an article
the company
show examples
, you trusted me and gave me one lakeside project which was very important for us and I was awarded for that project.
Moreover
, I
also
 participated in different events of the
company
 and dealt with foreign companies.
Therefore
, now I want to grow with
this
company
 and want to tackle some other tasks. I like to talk in person regarding my promotion and want to meet with you, whenever you are free. I hope you understand my perspective and set a meeting as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully,
Submitted by kaverigoti2209 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Task Response
You could elaborate a bit more on your varied achievements and specific responsibilities to strengthen your case for a promotion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to refine your grammar and sentence structures to make your letter more polished and professional.
Suitable Writing Tone
Your letter had a clear and courteous tone throughout.
Task Achievement
You included several relevant examples of your achievements, which enrich your request for a promotion.
Logical Structure
The letter has a logical structure, beginning with an introduction, followed by the main body, and ending with a polite closing.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!