The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Two line chart
domenstrate
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demonstrate
demonstrates
the ownership of electrical appliances the graph
display
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the per
houseworks
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housework
between 1920
to
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2019.
This
report will illustrate the both sides.
Overall
, the first graph of rate of eqiupment electrical have rise in 2019.
while
,
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the second graph describe the house working have
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.
According to
the first chart, the percentage of
householde
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households
household
,especially washing
machine
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have
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increase
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an amount 40% in 1920
,
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and
then
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climbed slightly to nearly 75% in 2019. On
other
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hand, the vacuum cleaner
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on 30% in the beginning,
after
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that dramatically
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to 100% in 2019. Despite the
refrigerator
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have
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decrease
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with
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zero
per
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cent,
although
, gradually
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to
the
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peak
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100% in 2019.
Follwoing
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the number of people
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working per week,considerably rose
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50 % in 1920, after that
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extremely
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down to
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approximately 15 %, between 1980 to 2000 the percentage
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stable
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10%. In final the data indicates the
last
point less five per cent in 2019.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • amount of time
  • housework
  • households
  • significantly
  • increased
  • decreased
  • majority
  • refrigerators
  • washing machines
  • televisions
  • advanced
  • dishwashers
  • air conditioning units
  • average
  • tasks
  • cooking
  • cleaning
  • laundry
  • availability
  • easier
  • faster
  • evolution
  • impact
  • distribution
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