The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the ownership of electrical appliances the graph

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the per

houseworks

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housework

between 1920

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2019.

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report will illustrate the both sides.

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, the first graph of rate of eqiupment electrical have rise in 2019.

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the second graph describe the house working have

decline

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.

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the first chart, the percentage of

householde

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households

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,especially washing

machine

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machines

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have

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increase

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an amount 40% in 1920

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and

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tend

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climbed slightly to nearly 75% in 2019. On

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hand, the vacuum cleaner

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on 30% in the beginning,

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that dramatically

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jumped

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to 100% in 2019. Despite the

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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have

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decrease

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decreased

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with

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zero

per

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cent,

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, gradually

increase

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to

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peak

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100% in 2019.

Follwoing

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the number of people

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working per week,considerably rose

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50 % in 1920, after that

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extremely

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down to

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approximately 15 %, between 1980 to 2000 the percentage

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stable

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10%. In final the data indicates the

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point less five per cent in 2019.