The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart provides a comparison of the
number
of
elephants
in 9 Asian
countries
from 1997 to 2004. The measure is the
number
of
elephants
.
Overall
, at first glance, two main points include a decrease in the population of
elephants
in almost all provided
countries
, in 2004, and keeping the position in ranking by having more
elephants
after 7 years by two leading
countries
namely India and Myanmar. Regarding the two leading
countries
, India and Myanmar could save their stage after a decline by about 2500 from just under 10000 and around 500 from a mere more than 5000 respectively.
Moreover
, China, Laos, Cambodia and Vietnam were
at the end
of the list of elephant populations from the beginning and the end of the given time period with about 1000
elephants
by some negligible difference in the
number
of
this
creature. Thailand fell to the fourth stage from third
due to
the loss about 3000 of
elephants
from less than 4000 to more than 1000, whilst Cambodia and Malaysia which had had the same
number
in 1997 lost different amounts and
also
could witness themselves up and down stage portion to Thailand respectively in 2004.
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  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trend
  • decline
  • increase
  • decrease
  • population
  • significant
  • dramatic
  • stability
  • data
  • estimate
  • notable
  • comparative
  • contrast
  • approximately
  • maximum
  • over the period
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