The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph shows the changes in maximum
number
of
Asian
elephants
between 1994 and 2007. As you can see obviously, it is noticeable that the largest
number
of
Asian
elephants
is in India.
Whereas
, the lowest
number
of
Asian
elephants
is in China in 1997 and 2004. But it can be seen that Thailand and Malaysia had a big gap from 1997 to 2004. In Vietnam, China, Cambodia and Laos, there were almost in the middle of 1000
Asian
elephants
between 1997 and 2004. In India, there were almost 10000
Asian
elephants
in 1997 and that
number
decreased more over 7000 in 2004. In Malaysia, there were nearly 3000
Asian
elephants
in 1997 and
in contrast
, the
number
went down to around 1000 in 2004. In Sri Lanka, there were exactly 3000
Asian
elephants
in 1997 and in 2004, the
number
decreased to less than 2800. In Thailand, there were nearly over 3700
Asian
elephants
in 1997 but the
number
decreased to less than 1200 in 2004. To summarise, it seems that the
number
of
Asian
elephants
between 1994 and 2007 changed a lot in some countries but some countries maintained steadily without big volatilities.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, asian, elephants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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  • peak
  • trend
  • decline
  • increase
  • decrease
  • population
  • significant
  • dramatic
  • stability
  • data
  • estimate
  • notable
  • comparative
  • contrast
  • approximately
  • maximum
  • over the period
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