Many believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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we have

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environmental. Some of

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issues

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as deforestation that

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government

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. In my view,

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disagree with the

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rather than gasoline consumption at first we must solve it .

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, deforestation is one of those problems that

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, there is no doubt topic of fossil fuels

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important.To be more exact,

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humans

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busy

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so they

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use petrol and gasoline so we

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face

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some issues

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as air pollution and global warming. To exemplify,

government

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the government

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can make

rule

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rules

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and increase the price of

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because

pople

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people

reduce

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consumption.

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, one of the solutions can

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the

envirmental

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environmental

problem

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increased

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the price. In conclusion, on the basis of the points above, it is true

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that consuming

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the

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fuel

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is one of the

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problem

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problems

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but every coin has two sides and we have a lot of

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

260 words

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