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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. The graph beow shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 2005.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. The graph beow shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 2005.
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The line graph illustrates
radio
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 and
television
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 audiences in Korea throughout the day from October to December
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2005. It is evident that the Korean population usually listened to the
radio
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 the most at 9 am.
On the other hand
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, the
television
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 watching
rate
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 was high from 4
pm
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 to 10
pm
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. Looking at the data in more detail, we can see that the most noticeable prime time for the
radio
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 was at 9 o’clock in the morning when approximately 27% of Koreans listened to the
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, which only lasted for a short period since the
audience
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rate
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 decreased after that. The second small
rise
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 in the
radio
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’s
audience
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rate
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 was at 4
pm
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 and
then
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 dropped again at 6
pm
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, with the highest
audience
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rate
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 during
this
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rise
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 being 15%. The
last
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 and smallest
rise
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 was at approximately
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10
pm
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 and only lasted no longer than 20 minutes until 11
pm
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 before dropping again.
In contrast
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, the
television
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’s
audience
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rate
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 was significantly lower in the morning. The first
rise
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 was at half past eight in the morning with approximately 7%
audience
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rate
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 and remained steady until 10 am before dropping. The second
rise
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 started at 1
pm
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 and hit the peak at around 2
pm
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 with approximately 16%
audience
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rate
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then
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 dropped again after 30 minutes. The prime time for
television
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 started at 4
pm
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 and rapidly climbed to a peak of 55% at 8
pm
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then
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 started to decline rapidly after 10
pm
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. In summary, two significant points can be observed from
this
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 line graph. The first point is that Koreans appeared to listen to the
radio
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 the most in the morning,
whereas
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 they usually watched
television
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 the most in the evening. The second point is that even though there were different time popularity patterns between
radio
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 and
television
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, which did not overlap each other,
television
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 was still far more popular among Koreans
according to
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 the
overall
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audience
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rate
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 throughout the day.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, television, rate, pm, audience, rise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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