Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. The graph beow shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 2005.
The line graph illustrates
radio
and television
audiences in Korea throughout the day from October to December in
2005. It is evident that the Korean population usually listened to the Change preposition
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radio
the most at 9 am. On the other hand
, the television
watching rate
was high from 4 pm
to 10 pm
.
Looking at the data in more detail, we can see that the most noticeable prime time for the radio
was at 9 o’clock in the morning when approximately 27% of Koreans listened to the radio
, which only lasted for a short period since the audience
rate
decreased after that. The second small rise
in the radio
’s audience
rate
was at 4 pm
and then
dropped again at 6 pm
, with the highest audience
rate
during this
rise
being 15%. The last
and smallest rise
was at approximately early
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pm
and only lasted no longer than 20 minutes until 11 pm
before dropping again. In contrast
, the television
’s audience
rate
was significantly lower in the morning. The first rise
was at half past eight in the morning with approximately 7% audience
rate
and remained steady until 10 am before dropping. The second rise
started at 1 pm
and hit the peak at around 2 pm
with approximately 16% audience
rate
then
dropped again after 30 minutes. The prime time for television
started at 4 pm
and rapidly climbed to a peak of 55% at 8 pm
then
started to decline rapidly after 10 pm
.
In summary, two significant points can be observed from this
line graph. The first point is that Koreans appeared to listen to the radio
the most in the morning, whereas
they usually watched television
the most in the evening. The second point is that even though there were different time popularity patterns between radio
and television
, which did not overlap each other, television
was still far more popular among Koreans according to
the overall
audience
rate
throughout the day.Submitted by jajaynmalik on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, television, rate, pm, audience, rise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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