All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adult. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, there is an increasing problem with obesity around the world. The reason

of

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this

is the

high calorie

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high-calorie

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includings

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including

in the food.

This

issue can be solved by propagandizing

the

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healthy lifestyle.

To begin

with, big corporations, nowadays, are likely to add certain unhealthy, but cheap ingredients to their production,

such

as

sugar

, in order to reduce the

expences

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on

the

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manufacturing to develop their income.

Hence

, consumers are suffering from

such

products, which causes obesity and other issues.

For example

,

according to

a recent study, almost all done products

on

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the

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supermarkets are overloaded

by

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with

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sugar

in

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apply

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them

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, compared to the past, when

amount

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the amount

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of

sugar

in food was significantly less.

Nevertheless

,

this

growing trend can be tackled by promoting another trend, that inspires individuals to start

healthy

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a healthy

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lifestyle.

In other words

,

popularised

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lifestyle would encourage the

mass

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masses

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to do some beneficial activities like visiting a gym, going

to

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the

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swimming and other types of

sport

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sports

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,

that

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which

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helps

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help

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to keep fit. To illustrate, some

sport

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sports

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residences can make

a bonuses

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a bonus

bonuses

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to the people who actively attend their trainings, or create

an interesting advertisements

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interesting advertisements

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on popular platforms

such

as

instagram

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Instagram

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or

tik tok

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TikTok

.

Therefore

, obesity

level

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on

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the world would be decreased as

sport

get

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viral.

To conclude

,

although

large companies are making the products more dangerous

by

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with

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extra

sugar

, that leads to

a

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consequenses

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consequences

with overweight.

This

triuble

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trouble

can be solved by popularised

sport

that inspires people to be fit.