The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

The bar chart depicts the contribution of five unique industries to Brazil's economy in 2009,

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and a prediction for 2029. First of all, the financial sector can be seen

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the most shares of all time, steadily increasing in percentage from 30% in 2009 to around 36% in 2019, with a forecast of roughly 41% in 2029. The food processing industry

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experienced a surge in 2019, doubling the percentage from the previously recorded 10% in 2009.

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shows that it will come back down to the percentage it reached in the first decade.

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, fuel companies saw a slight growth of 5% in 2019 from the first 25% in 2009. It has

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been predicted to follow the same pattern as the food industry in the following decade.

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, both tourism and manufacturing have declined throughout the period. What sets them apart is that after tourism decreased in value in 2019, from about 25% to 20%, it settled down and experienced no changes until 2029.

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While manufacturing

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Manufacturing

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has been devaluating as time goes

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relevant in 2009 at more or less 21% to a whopping 5% in 2029

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researchers. To summarize, there had and will be a mild shift in Brazil's

economy

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economic

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flow, with finance being the main focus and manufacturing companies losing relevance in the near future.