The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
The bar chart depicts the percentage shares of the Brazilian economy for five distinct industries in 2009, 2019, and 2029.  The year 2009 was a good year for finance, tourism, oil, coal, and gas industries because they achieved numbers of 31%, 26% and 26% respectively. Meanwhile, the lowest point of that year was their food processing industry reaching the count of 11%.  10 years later in 2019, finance is still at the top with a rough
number
of 42%. The oil, coal, and gas industries are behind them with a
number
of 31%. Both tourism and food processing have the same
number
of 21%
while
manufacturing has a moderate
number
of 16%. A forecast was made for the next decade which is in 2029. Finance was said to hit its peak, reaching the
number
of 42%. Oil, coal, and gas trail behind them at 26%. Meanwhile, manufacturing has its lowest amount despite its huge numbers in both 2009 and 2019.
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