It is widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together, while others think that more intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss and present your opinion.
It is known that not all childrens are in the same level of
intelligence
,however
schools educating all the children
together dispte their intelligence
scores,In my opinion intelligence
is a double meaning word,the world do not have a method to measure it,Also
there are diffrent kind of it,for example
,there are people with a great musical abilities,there are children
with better understanding of math and physics,due to
this
fact it have good impact for their education progress to be around different kinds of minds,this
would allows them to learn much more from each other,also
it is more important for their social skills,If schools dived children
their environment will shrink,and their social abilities of comunicat woth different kind of people will be lost,although
there are children
with much less abilities and due to
that they would not be able to contace with others,they would feel abandoned and left out,so this
types of children
could work together,also
with teachers
that trying to involves them in begger places,for exampleIn KSA there is a program for this
kind of people with exprts theacher,furthermore
there are programs for intelligence
children
,in KSA they provide for them supportful environments,Also
teachers
at school have a main rule,They have to close the gap between children
,while
there are teachers
give all the support to the most intelligent students others give it to each child regardless of their grades,to sum up
it is impotant for children
to work togther regardless of their scoors,being in a huge environments ismuch better for them,parents and teachers
need to workout the sestem,by closing the gab and supporting them.Submitted by 12gna13 on
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