`The graph below shows home heating fuel choice according to the year the house was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisions where relevant
The line graphs illustrate the information about households
chose
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choosing
an
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apply
electricity
and natural gas
for heating according to
a construction year since
before 1950 to 2010.
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from
Overall
, it can be seen that a building which was constructed before 1950 mainly used natural gas
as power
source Correct article usage
a power
about
60% of homes and remained at the same level till 1969, and Change preposition
for about
then
fell significantly approximately
15% between 1969 and 1989, after that the amount of Change preposition
by approximately
gas
used by residents stayed at 45% until 2010.
In comparison, An
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apply
electricity
was less popular than electricity
at the beginning, starting with 15%. However
, the total number of accomodations preferred to use electricities as heating fuel increased steadily throughout the period with 10% every 20 years. Eventually, in 2010 the need of
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for
electricity
and natural gas
was at the same level accouting
for 45%.
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accounting
To conclude
, it is noticeable that people used
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use
electricity
instead
of natural gas
for warming
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to warm
in
their Change preposition
apply
house
Fix the agreement mistake
houses
moreover
in every year through a given period.Submitted by sippakorn.wet on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, gas with synonyms.
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