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The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates information about air pollutants in 4 regions, which comprises the median daily, minimum and maximum levels in 2020.
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Mexico
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City
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 is the area that has the highest polluted environment in both research emissions. First and foremost, N20 appears more than SO2 emissions in Los Angeles and
Mexico
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City
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 with 39 to 104
micrograms
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 per m3 and 113 to 207
micrograms
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 per m3 respectively.
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, CO2 is more popular emissions in Calcutta and Beijing with 47 to 59 and 25 to 100
micrograms
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 per m3.
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,
Mexico
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City
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 is the most polluted
city
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 in 4 observation regions
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 a level of SO2 from 80 to 200
micrograms
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 per m3, which is higher 20 to 40 times than the levels in Los Angeles.
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, N20
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 is more popular 4 to 8 times than Beijing, which has the rank of N20 is the lowest.
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 but not least, It seems that the environment of Calcutta is the freshest
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in the
 4 cities,
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 average of SO2 from 47 to 59
micrograms
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 per m3 which is lower than in Beijing and
Mexico
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City
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. Meanwhile, The maximum N20 level is the lowest.

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