The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the results of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.

The table describes the

numbers

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of visitors to the Ashdown

musuem

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museum

throughout the

year

before and the

year

after

is

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it

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was refurbished. The results of a survey asking visitors how satisfied

while

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they

are

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were

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with their visit during the same two periods

was

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shown in that chart.

Overall

, it can be pointed out from the chart that, the dissatisfied and the satisfied were the most

while

the no response was the least.

According to

the table, during the

year

of

refurbishment

74,000 ,and about 92,000 people were during the

year

after

refurbishment

were visited the museum. It is obvious from the charts that, the dissatisfied and the very dissatisfied were about 40

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year

before and after

refurbishment

.

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,

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the very satisfied started from 15 and jumped up to 35.

However

, the no response stayed stable 5. To compare the very

dissatisfies

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dissatisfied

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were dropped at 10 to

the

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5.

Moreover

, 5 % of people the no response and

very

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were very

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dissatisfied were shown the

year

after the

refurbishment

.