The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The pie charts illustrate the methods used to manage dangerous
waste
products in the Republic of
Korea
,
Sweden
, and the United
Kingdom
, represented as percentages.
Overall
, the most common method in both
Sweden
and the United
Kingdom
is underground disposal,
while
recycling is predominant in the Republic of
Korea
. Notably, the United
Kingdom
employs a wider variety of
waste
disposal methods compared to the other two countries. In
Korea
, recycling accounts for the largest proportion at 69%, followed by underground disposal at 22% and incineration at 9%. In
Sweden
, 55% of dangerous
waste
is disposed of underground, which is the highest proportion, followed by recycling at 25% and incineration at 20%.
In contrast
, the United
Kingdom
disposes of 82% of its dangerous
waste
underground. The remaining 18% is distributed among chemical treatment (8%), sea dumping (8%), and incineration (2%). In summary,
while
underground disposal is the predominant method in
Sweden
and the United
Kingdom
,
Korea
primarily relies on recycling to manage its dangerous
waste
products. The United
Kingdom
also
diversifies its
waste
management strategies more than the other two countries.
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