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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
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The pie charts illustrate the methods used to manage dangerous
waste
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 products in the Republic of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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, and the United
Kingdom
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, represented as percentages.
Overall
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, the most common method in both
Sweden
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 and the United
Kingdom
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 is underground disposal,
while
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 recycling is predominant in the Republic of
Korea
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. Notably, the United
Kingdom
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 employs a wider variety of
waste
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 disposal methods compared to the other two countries. In
Korea
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, recycling accounts for the largest proportion at 69%, followed by underground disposal at 22% and incineration at 9%. In
Sweden
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, 55% of dangerous
waste
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 is disposed of underground, which is the highest proportion, followed by recycling at 25% and incineration at 20%.
In contrast
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, the United
Kingdom
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 disposes of 82% of its dangerous
waste
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 underground. The remaining 18% is distributed among chemical treatment (8%), sea dumping (8%), and incineration (2%). In summary,
while
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 underground disposal is the predominant method in
Sweden
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 and the United
Kingdom
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,
Korea
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 primarily relies on recycling to manage its dangerous
waste
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 products. The United
Kingdom
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also
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 diversifies its
waste
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 management strategies more than the other two countries.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, korea, sweden, kingdom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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