Most people are so selfish that not to attend social entertainment like a national festival. Still, they spend time on entertainment. Give reasons for the above issues and how to solve them.

A significant number of people are so selfish that they don't attend the social

entertainments

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entertainment

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such

as national

festival

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festivals

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and

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religions

religious

religons

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religious ceremonies

cermoney

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ceremony

ceremonies

while

they still spend time on

entertainments

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entertainment

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,I think that attending social

entertainments

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entertainment

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are

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is

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more important than anything else

Firstly

, not going to the social

entertainments

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entertainment

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can

afford for

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give

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you the time to do something more important

also

if you can't bear

with

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apply

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the

croud

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crowd

I think you must not go there because usually the social

entertainments

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entertainment

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places are too crowded , an example

for

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of

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this

sutiuation

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situation

on the

last

national festival I went with

one

of my friends who hates loud noises , just after

one

hour he told me that he can't stay and

then

he left the festival.

On the other

hand

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going to the social

entertainments

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entertainment

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is a very important action that

every body

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everybody

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should do

it

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apply

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,

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apply

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because if

no body

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nobody

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went

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goes

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to the national festivals

then

after

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a couble

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couble

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couple

of years no

one

is going to remember the national festivals,

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in South Africa before approximately ten years no

one

attended the national festival since that time no

one

still

celebrate

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celebrates

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with South Africa national day . In conclusion , social

entertainments

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entertainment

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gives

a

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apply

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value to the country so we need to attend it

in addition

we must tell

every body

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everybody

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we meet

to

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apply

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the value of those days

also

we can do

a campaigns

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a campaign

campaigns

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to

advice

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advise

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the people to attend .