The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same period.

The above table shows the final number of visitors to Ashdown

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during the

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before renovated and the

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after it,

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the pie charts illustrate the visitor’s satisfaction extent after comparing the

museum

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before and after the refurbishment.

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of visitors increased from 74000 to 92000 tourists throughout the

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, showing a positive impact on the

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after finishing the reconstruction. For more accurate data, visitors were asked to do a quick survey asking their satisfaction level after stopping by the

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, comparing it before and after the renovation. From the chart, over 35 people stated that they were very satisfied

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the visit after the renovation compared to only 15 people the

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before.

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of the

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were seen to be on the satisfied level.

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there are still a number of respondents

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dissatisfied after the reconstruction, the total has decreased significantly in opposition to the period before the refurbishment.