+ TABLE CHILDREN The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019.
This
line graph illustrates the information about therate
number of children born to one woman. Correct your spelling
the
Furthermore
, the table depicts the range of age at which mothers have their first child. This
information was registered between 1920-2019 in two countries UK
and Kazakhstan
.
As an initial overview, the average age of first child in Kazakhstan
is lower than UK
among all years
, as it started in 1920 with 23.5 years
old and 26.5 years
old in UK
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the UK
additionally
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in Kazakhstan
. However
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A more details look at the line graph that, the number of children began with 2 children in UK
and around 3.5 in Correct article usage
the UK
Kazakhstan
, and this
range increased slightly until reached the highest number in 1960 with around 2.8 in UK
and approximately 4.5 in Correct article usage
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Kazakhstan
. Subsequently
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Kazakhstan
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