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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The provided charts illustrate global
pineapple
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exports
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 from the top three producing nations between 2009 and 2019, alongside a breakdown of the cost incurred by consumers for each
pineapple
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 in 2019. The first chart reveals a significant increase in
pineapple
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exports
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 from
Country
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 A, rising from approximately 2
million
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 metric
tonnes
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 in 2009 to around 10
million
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 in 2019.
In contrast
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,
Country
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 B's
exports
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 fluctuated, starting at 6
million
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tonnes
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 in 2009 and reaching a peak of 8
million
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tonnes
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 in 2019 before declining to 5
million
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tonnes
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.
Country
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 C's
exports
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 remained relatively stable, with a slight increase from 1
million
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 to 2
million
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tonnes
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 during the same period. The second chart details the cost components of a single
pineapple
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 in 2019. Producer costs constituted the largest portion at 35%, followed by distribution and retail at 16% and 18% respectively. Export costs, international transport, and import licenses accounted for 12%, 10%, and 5% respectively,
while
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 profit and taxes contributed 4% each.
Overall
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, the data indicates a substantial growth in
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exports
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 from
Country
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 A, with a more varied performance from
Country
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 B and a modest increase from
Country
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 C. The cost breakdown highlights the significant contribution of producer costs and distribution/retail to the final price paid by consumers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, exports, country, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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