Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Because

of

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we are living in the era of Renaissance nowadays, the forest has become the main victim

unfortunately

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, in

this

essay, I shall elaborate on

also

I shall reveal my point of view

according to

this

topic.

To begin

with, generally speaking about the forests .

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is consider

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as

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a natural landmark,

hence

, it has

a

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numerous benefits for the ecosystem and eventually to

the

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humankind for many reasons:

firstly

,

however

, it

considers

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as

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a sign of beauty on the global earth,

secondly

;

which

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is

also

a crucial cause ,

thus

, it forms a main environment for the

animals

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habitat.

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, it's

also

hasing

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having

an action in hands_up against the dust and air pollution.

Furthermore

, the source of main

trees

like cork

trees

.

On the other hand

, life upgrading,

as well as

the time of revolution has become a factor in utilising the wood from the major and ancient

trees

inorder

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to make a furniture or home ,

as a result

in destroying a hundred of giant

trees

to rise the industry level.

For instance

; data analysis detected a thousand

of

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trees

are

cutting

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off weekly to make

papers

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and

similarly

,

for supplying

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the

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fire to make it flames up. I see the demand for

the

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natural plants

is

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an important matter, which

is enable

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us to meet our needs.

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,

the

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life's demands have indicated

for

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it,

but

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the balance

in

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implantation and deforestation is

also

a significant matter. I wholeheartedly concur with providing a reservation for

this

natural implant. To sum it up,

while

, the forest is a major reservoir for

a

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human demand,

therefore

, they should provide

a

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protection to them .

This

is a crucial issue,

besides

, it should be

resitrected

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restricted

and forbidden by the authorities, and the

ustilising

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utilising

also

ought

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be under

a

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specialist supervision.