The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The two graphs represent the monthly gym usage and the proportion of its
members
' age in Miami and Florida in 2017. The bar graph illustrates that from January to June, the average gradually increased, yet, it slowly started decreasing from July to December. The peak average of health club usage was in June with an estimation of 850 male
members
and 700 female
members
. The lowest usage was in February, which had only 500 female
members
and 550 male
members
. The pie charts show that 55% of male
members
were between the ages of 21 and 45. A quarter of it were elderly people and one-fifth of it were teenagers, who were below 21. As for the female
members
, half of them were between the ages of 21 and 45 and 31% of them were above the age of 65.
Additionally
, there were 19% of female
members
that were below the age of 21.
To sum up
, the majority of the health club memberships were male adults.
Moreover
, the average of male adults using the health club was always higher than the number of female
members
every month.
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