The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps provided the information about the city hospital’s
road
access in between 2007 and 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the hospital routes were enhanced with Linking Words
few
facilities, Correct article usage
a few
such
as roundabouts, Linking Words
Use synonyms
bus
station, and a car Correct article usage
a bus
park
. Use synonyms
However
, the hospital remains Linking Words
same
.
Correct article usage
the same
According to
the first map, the city hospital was surrounded by a ring Linking Words
road
, Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
it
connected with a hospital Correct pronoun usage
apply
road
. There were six Use synonyms
bus
stops allocated for Use synonyms
the
public access. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, behind the Linking Words
bus
Use synonyms
stop
there was a car Add a comma
stop,
park
designed for staff and Use synonyms
public
.
Three years later, they newly created two roundabouts to reduce the traffic. On the left side of the hospital Correct article usage
the public
road
, they amended the Use synonyms
bus
stops as a Use synonyms
bus
station and it directly connects Use synonyms
the
both roundabouts. In comparison with Remove the article
apply
previous
car Correct article usage
the previous
park
, they split and enlarged it Use synonyms
also
, they have provided separate entrances to the parking. Linking Words
Therefore
, more Linking Words
vehicle
can Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
park
at the same time.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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