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In sports, many young adults are inspired by famous
players
to pursue their dreams of becoming professional Use synonyms
players
like their idols. Use synonyms
This
trend definitely will have positive impacts on the youth, and can Linking Words
also
result in some drawbacks.
The exposure to social media about famous Linking Words
players
has spurred the interest of young people to train like their role models. Use synonyms
For example
, a well-known Linking Words
football
player Kylian Use synonyms
Mbappe
was inspired by Christiano Ronaldo (CR7), one of the greatest of all time in Use synonyms
football
history, which I have witnessed too. When Use synonyms
Mbappe
was still in the training phase as a kid, he used to watch the footage of CR7's skills and dream of playing like him. He Use synonyms
also
collected pictures and stickers in his room, just to keep him motivated. Today, Linking Words
Mbappe
is now becoming the highest-paid Use synonyms
football
player and Use synonyms
also
joined the former club CR7, Real Madrid. Linking Words
This
phenomenon proves that dreaming of being like an idol will help the youths to succeed in their professional career.
Following famous Linking Words
players
could be Use synonyms
also
a negative trend if the young Linking Words
players
do not believe in their natural potential. I strongly believe that each individual has a unique character that differs from everyone else. In my opinion, Use synonyms
although
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Mbappe
dreamed of being like CR7, Use synonyms
Mbappe
is totally having different skills and styles in playing Use synonyms
football
. The young generation should be able to dig deeply into their true potential and sharpen it.
In summary, having role models in sports will help the next young Use synonyms
players
to stay motivated in achieving their dreams. Use synonyms
However
, they should Linking Words
also
believe in their own potential.Linking Words
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