Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding your recent advertisement about looking for people to do unpaid work in the clinic. I would like to volunteer to help at the hospital in my spare time. I would be more than happy to
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simple medication and take patients out for walks for some fresh air. My grandmother has recently been hospitalized,
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I know how hard it is for a sick person to keep a positive mindset.
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, I could help
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their mood
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spending some time with them.
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would not only help the hospital
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but
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give me a
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of
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and joy. I am available to do unpaid work at the infirmary on weekends, particularly in the mornings, since I work part-time in the afternoons.
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, I can definitely adjust my schedule, if necessary. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to working with you. Yours faithfully, Anne.
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task achievement
Make sure to provide more details about why you want to volunteer. It would strengthen your task achievement score.
coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
The letter has a good logical structure and is easy to follow, enhancing coherence and cohesion.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing parts of the letter are appropriately done.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for the context and purpose.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • volunteer
  • unpaid work
  • free time
  • dedication
  • healthcare
  • assist
  • patients
  • administrative tasks
  • commitment
  • flexibility
  • personal satisfaction
  • inspired
  • community service
  • contribute
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