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The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts below compare the
area
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 and
population
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 distribution of the seven continents in the
world
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 at present. It is noticeable that Asia has the highest percentage of both the
world
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's
land
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area
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 and
population
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, making it the most densely populated continent.
In contrast
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, Oceania and Antarctica have the least
land
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area
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 and
population
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, respectively. Asia, home to 61% of the
world
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's
population
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, occupies only 30% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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. Africa, the second-largest continent by
land
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area
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 (20%), contains 13% of the global
population
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. Europe, despite being the third most populous continent, comprises only 7% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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. North and South America have
land
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-to-
population
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 ratios below one. North America, with 16% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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, has 8% of the global
population
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,
while
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 South America, covering 12% of the
land
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, is home to 5.5% of the
population
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. Oceania, covering 6% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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, has only 0.5% of the
population
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.
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, Antarctica, despite covering about 9% of the
world
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's
land
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area
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, has no permanent inhabitants

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, population, world, land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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