Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: - Describe the book. - Why do you want him/her to read it? - Tell him/her how to get the book.

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Dear John, I hope you are doing great, we didn't talk for a

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, but now I have great news for you. Yesterday I finished reading a

book

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. The

book

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is called Nothing Can Break You" and I am pretty sure it is an excellent choice for

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a sport

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sport

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sports

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freak like you. The

book

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have

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a great cover, with some motivational pictures. There is a small note from the author on the back. As I mentioned before, you love

sport

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sports

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, so you will love

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book

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, the stories are great, and full of raw motivational energy! You know me, I am a lazy guy, but now, I run 2km every day,

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is crazy.

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, I am sure you will gain new energy like me, after reading, you will win the competition, with no doubt. I can borrow the

book

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, but if you want to have your own, you can buy it in the bookstore on Library Avenue, or online. I personally prefer the second option but it is your choice. I am looking forward to seeing you! Best wishes, George

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Try to elaborate a bit more on describing the book, such as its plot or main themes. This will give your friend a clearer idea of what to expect.

coherence cohesion

Ensure all paragraphs are well-structured and clearly focus on a single main idea.

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The tone of the letter is friendly and engaging, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

You have included a greeting and a closing, making the letter feel complete and well-framed.

coherence cohesion

The logical flow from describing the book to explaining why your friend should read it, and then how to obtain it, is clear and easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

181 words

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