Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: - Describe the book. - Why do you want him/her to read it? - Tell him/her how to get the book.

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Dear John, I hope you are doing great, we didn't talk for a

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, but now I have great news for you. Yesterday I finished reading a

book

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. The

book

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is called Nothing Can Break You" and I am pretty sure it is an excellent choice for

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a sport

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sport

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sports

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freak like you. The

book

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have

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a great cover, with some motivational pictures. There is a small note from the author on the back. As I mentioned before, you love

sport

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sports

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, so you will love

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book

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, the stories are great, and full of raw motivational energy! You know me, I am a lazy guy, but now, I run 2km every day,

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is crazy.

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, I am sure you will gain new energy like me, after reading, you will win the competition, with no doubt. I can borrow the

book

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, but if you want to have your own, you can buy it in the bookstore on Library Avenue, or online. I personally prefer the second option but it is your choice. I am looking forward to seeing you! Best wishes, George

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Try to elaborate a bit more on describing the book, such as its plot or main themes. This will give your friend a clearer idea of what to expect.

coherence cohesion

Ensure all paragraphs are well-structured and clearly focus on a single main idea.

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The tone of the letter is friendly and engaging, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

You have included a greeting and a closing, making the letter feel complete and well-framed.

coherence cohesion

The logical flow from describing the book to explaining why your friend should read it, and then how to obtain it, is clear and easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

181 words

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Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: - Describe the book. - Why do you want him/her to read it? - Tell him/her how to get the book.

Most teenagers today own a smartphone. Provide your opinion to discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?