Starting
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computerFix the agreement mistake
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from
youngAdd an article
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age
can benefit children in many ways.
This
can have many
advantages
as well as
, many
disadvantages
.I will discuss both
advantages
and
disadvantages
and
then
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will share why
advantages
are more than
disadvantages
.
If a child starts using
computerAdd an article
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from
smallCorrect word choice
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age
.He will learn different skills very quickly
according to
his
age
.
In addition
, someone who has spent enough
time
with
computerCorrect article usage
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not have to worry about his job after the completion of his studies.
Furthermore
,He will be able to support himself and his family as
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he will have
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of online work
itCorrect pronoun usage
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is only possible if he
had spentWrong verb form
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much
time
on
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.
For instance
, My friend Ali is now
doing Unnecessary verb
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freelancing and
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am still unemployed. He is doing an online job
this
become possible for him because he started using
computerAdd an article
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from small
age
and he was learning skills when we used to play football.
On the other hand
, Starting
usingChange the verb form
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computerAdd an article
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when you are young can have various
disadvantages
.
Firstly
, if someone is young and he
spendChange the verb form
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more
time
with his
computer
than playing physical games he can lose his
eye sightCorrect your spelling
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because using screens for long hours can
effectCorrect your spelling
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eyesCorrect pronoun usage
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easily.
Secondly
,If a child is not taking part in physical sports he can easily become
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than other children of
sameAdd an article
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age
.
Therefore
,It can be very harmful at the same
time
.
In conclusion,Children can become lazy and they might lose their
eye sightCorrect your spelling
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but the
skillFix the agreement mistake
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they can learn at that
age
and
knowledgeCorrect article usage
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they can gain by spending
time
with computers can not be explained in words. So,
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will say that
advantagesCorrect article usage
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are more than
disadvantagesCorrect article usage
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because we can use computers to learn skills
while
taking part in physical sports and
our health.