You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. there is a problem with photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot in your letter explain. what is the problem with your photos. say which photo you would like him or her to send you. explain why you need this Photo.

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Dear ram, I hope

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letter finds you in great spirits. The

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weekend was great we did so many good things at our summer camp like, boating, hiking and so many other things. All the memories rushed through my mind today when I was checking our

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checking our

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I found that some photographs are blurred especially the group

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. I think

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happened because I captured all the

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with my phone. Even the quality of the images is not good. I know you owned a DSLR camera even

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took so many images that day. If it is possible can you please send me a few group

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In which all the teachers and students are present. Because I want to frame the group photo as a memory. From Next week our classes will start if it is possible can we meet. Yours lovingly, Vivek

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coherence cohesion

Your ideas are logically organized, but try to ensure each paragraph has a clear, single focus. For example, the explanation of the problem with the photos and the request for group photos could be more distinct.

task achievement

While the letter effectively addresses the task prompt, explaining why you need the particular photo can be made slightly clearer and more detailed.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

task achievement

You provided a complete response to the prompt, addressing all key points: the problem with your photos, which photo you would like, and why you need it.

task achievement

The tone of your letter is friendly and suitable for the context of writing to a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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