The graph below gives invormation about percentage of pupulation in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graph illustrates information on the Linking Words
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of the population in four different Asian countries living in Use synonyms
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predicts the number of Linking Words
people
that will be living in the future from 2030 to 2040 based on previous analysis.
The four different countries are the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia. In 1970 it is seen from the graph that Indonesia had the Use synonyms
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with approximately 15 per cent of the Use synonyms
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Malaysia and the Philippines are the two highest countries that have the most humans living in Use synonyms
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From 1970 onward there is a gradual increase seen in the graph with each country and is expected to increase in the future which will conclude that the Use synonyms
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Malaysia is expected to be the Use synonyms
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, with an estimated more than 80 per cent of the population living in Use synonyms
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