The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The table chart illustrates Australian and Malaysian populations including

birth

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rate

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and average population increase per year and the number of people aged over 65

years

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old, between the

years

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1980 and 2002.

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, one noticeable feature of the data is that the number of Malaysian citizens considerably rose by 2002 compared to the total public of

Australia

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at the same period of time.

According to

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the

birth

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rate

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, both countries experienced a downward trend over 20

years

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, with

Malaysia

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birth

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rate

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significantly dropping by 2002. Interestingly, the elderly citizens in

Australia

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outnumbered that of Malaysians, around one-third of the total in comparison with

Australia

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's numbers. Regarding population growth,the total of residents residing in

Malaysia

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substantially soared by 10 million over 20

years

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, with half of the total as male and another as female. As far as the

birth

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rate

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is concerned,

Malaysia

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's historical record declined from 3.2% at the beginning of the period to 2.2%

at the end

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Consequently

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, the average total of population growth per year in

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also

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outnumbered the figures for

Australia

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which stood at approximately 1%

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the other nation's number accounted for 2% over the period.

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