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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
cycle
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 diagram depicts how
plastic
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bottles
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 are recycled.
In addition
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,
this
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 diagram provides specific pictures to realize more.
Overall
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, the
cycle
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 diagram shows nine steps, being divided into three major steps to explain.
Firstly
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,
bottles
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 are delivered to the recycling centre,
then
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 starting to be recycled.
Secondly
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, they are reshaped, ultimately producing various items again.
To begin
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 with,
plastic
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bottles
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 are throughout to the
cycle
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 cones,
then
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 the
cycle
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 cars send these
plastic
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bottles
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 to the recycling centre to be sorted.
Subsequently
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, these
plastic
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 items are compressed into cubes, thereby being more convenient to be crushed by the two massive gears. After the crushing step, these
plastic
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 materials are washed in a cavity.
Next,
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the machine produces
plastic
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 pellets from original
plastic
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 picks. These
plastic
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 pellets are reshaped to the raw material and packaged into the boxes. Eventually, these raw materials are reshaped into various items,
such
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 as T-shirts,
plastic
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 bags, and
plastic
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bottles
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 to fulfil the target of recycling.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cycle, plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collection
  • recycling centers
  • transported
  • recycling plant
  • sorted
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • shredded
  • flakes
  • melted
  • pellets
  • raw material
  • manufacturing
  • containers
  • clothing
  • recycling loop
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