The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
cycle
diagram depicts how plastic
bottles
are recycled. In addition
, this
diagram provides specific pictures to realize more.
Overall
, the cycle
diagram shows nine steps, being divided into three major steps to explain. Firstly
, bottles
are delivered to the recycling centre, then
starting to be recycled. Secondly
, they are reshaped, ultimately producing various items again.
To begin
with, plastic
bottles
are throughout to the cycle
cones, then
the cycle
cars send these plastic
bottles
to the recycling centre to be sorted. Subsequently
, these plastic
items are compressed into cubes, thereby being more convenient to be crushed by the two massive gears.
After the crushing step, these plastic
materials are washed in a cavity. Next,
the machine produces plastic
pellets from original plastic
picks. These plastic
pellets are reshaped to the raw material and packaged into the boxes. Eventually, these raw materials are reshaped into various items, such
as T-shirts, plastic
bags, and plastic
bottles
to fulfil the target of recycling.Submitted by daniellin0717 on
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