Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing What you would like to happen A nice, respectful style
Dear Mr soman,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I want to draw your attention to the problem I am facing because of your dog
. As you know I do the early morning shift and a good sleep is necessary for me to start my day but in the past few days that’s become impossible for me because your dog
bark all night in the courtyard.
Even sometimes my daughter gets scared in the middle of the night.
I am also
a dog
lover but the barking of your dog
makes me uncomfortable during my bedtime. Due to
the poor sleep, I am not able to focus on my work.
So please, if possible can please keep your dog
inside the room for a few days because from next month I have night shifts.
I hope you understand my situation and help me to get over this
problem.
Yours truly,
Ankur KumarSubmitted by vivek6909127 on
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task achievement
Consider elaborating slightly more on what specific actions you think Mr. Soman could take to reduce the dog's barking at night.
coherence cohesion
Ensure there is a clear, smooth flow between paragraphs to enhance coherence. For example, you could connect the paragraph about your daughter's fear to your own discomfort more fluidly.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a respectful and polite tone throughout, which is well-suited for the request being made.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal for a letter to a neighbor, which adds to the politeness of the request.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,