The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table based on the people in
Australia
and
Malaysia
given certain periods between 1980 and 2002 was shown in that picture.
Overall
, it is visible from the table that, women's
population
was the greatest
while
the average annual inhabitants growth was the lowest in specific periods of time in
Australia
and
Malaysia
.
Also
,
Malaysia
`s birth rate was higher than
Australia
's,
in contrast
, the public aged over 65 in
Australia
was bigger than
Malaysia
`s.
According to
the information, the total number of citizens jumped from 14.7 to 19.6 between 1980 and 2002. In comparison, in
Australia
, the male and female folks stayed stable during that time. They were at 49.9 and 50.1
However
, the birth rate was unpopular throughout
Australia
so it descended from 1.5 to 1.3.
Moreover
, the total society in
Malaysia
began at 13.7 and it increased to 24.3 during that specific time. Still, it was lower than the guy's
population
. Average annual
population
growth dropped by 1%. The maximum result was 50.6 for men ,
in contrast
, the minimum was 2.1 for the average annual
population
increase in
Malaysia
.
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