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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The process diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a
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ladybird
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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 and
its
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the
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 parts of the body
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, there are diagrams, which consist of two natural processes. The first cyclical, natural procedure,which shows the life cycle of a
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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. Meanwhile, the second diagram introduces
about
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the anatomy of a
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ladybird
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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 In the first cyclical process diagram, the vital material is eggs. They lay on the underside of a leaf and
bearing
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 there for between two
or
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and
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 five days.
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this
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 comes
larval
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the larval
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 stage, which lasts
twenty one
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 days. Following that it sticks to
leaf
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the leaf
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during
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for
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 seven days, and
turn
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turns
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to
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into
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 an adult
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ladybird
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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At the
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The
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 second picture shows
anatomy
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the anatomy
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 of a
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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. The
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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 has
head
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a head
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, legs and wings. On the
head
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head,
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 there are eyes, antenne and protonium. Both
of
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wings are covered by red elytra and black spot and six legs, three on each side of the body
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Vocabulary: Replace the words lady, bird with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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