The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the process of recycling plastics, outlining each stage from product use to final disposal.
The cycle begins when consumers purchase and use
plastic
products
from a shop. Thereafter
, once these products
are used, they often end up as bags and rubbish. Following
this
, the used bottles are collected and transported to a sorting house where they are separated based on type.
The following step is
that the sorted plastic
bottles are driven to a processing facility. As a consequence
, they undergo various treatments to be transformed into new materials. As a result
, the final stage of this
process is either converting the processed materials into new products
or, if not recyclable, sending them to a landfill.
Overall
, the diagram depicts a complicated process describing the recycling system, emphasizing the journey of plastic
products
from consumption to potential reuse or disposal, highlighting the importance of each stage in managing plastic
waste.Submitted by eparfenenkov on
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