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The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided diagram illustrates the process of recycling plastics, outlining each stage from product use to final disposal. The cycle begins when consumers purchase and use
plastic
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products
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 from a shop.
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, once these
products
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 are used, they often end up as bags and rubbish.
Following
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this
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, the used bottles are collected and transported to a sorting house where they are separated based on type.
The following step is
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 that the sorted
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 bottles are driven to a processing facility.
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, they undergo various treatments to be transformed into new materials.
As a result
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, the final stage of
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 process is either converting the processed materials into new
products
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 or, if not recyclable, sending them to a landfill.
Overall
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, the diagram depicts a complicated process describing the recycling system, emphasizing the journey of
plastic
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products
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 from consumption to potential reuse or disposal, highlighting the importance of each stage in managing
plastic
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 waste.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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