Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Economic

progress

is a priority for many governments. Meanwhile, some of the local citizens consider other kinds of

progress

as important as economic

progress

. I think that all types of

progress

are equal because citizen’s satisfaction doesn’t depend only on the finances of the

country

. On the one hand, finances play a great role in a

country

’s development. When the economic condition is good, the city will improve more and more, because infrastructure, low taxes, and other factors which make local people happy, require a great deal of money.

For example

, let’s take a look at the United Arab Emirates. A

country

with perfect financial status. The

country

is picturesque

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and breathtaking and individuals are happy there.

On the other hand

, educational and medical

progress

are equally as important as financial. Decent conditions for studying will grow up literate and sensible people and the

country

will have more chances for a bright future. Medicine should be taken into account

as well as

the factors mentioned above.

Furthermore

, free treatment for diseases which require a great deal of money should be provided at least for people with financial problems , because it will have a positive impact not only on citizens, but

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reputation. By way of illustration - Turkey. Doctors are treated very well there and so patients are.

To conclude

, a

country

’s development will not depend only on finances, but medicine and education are

also

necessary for the nation. Only by balancing all these factors

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country

will develop.