You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart displays the different ways of transport utilized to travel to work in one European City in 1960 , 1980 and 2000 .
Overall
car transportation showed the highest ascend in the year 2000 counter to bike usage which showed a massive decrease in the same year . It is clearly seen that walking was the most known mode of transport during 1960 among 35% of the population of the city . Biking was
also
common by just over 25%
while
the rest of the individuals used buses and cars for transport. Bus use grew to just over 25% ,followed by car use for transportby 25% in 1980 .
However
, figures remained steady in a range of just below 20% to roughly over it . The year 2000 witnessed a massive decline in biking ,
on the other hand
, car use became the most common mode and rose to over 35% .
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • modes of transport
  • public policy
  • urbanization
  • lifestyle changes
  • technological advancements
  • environment
  • city infrastructure
  • popularity
  • comparison
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • data
  • figures
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