The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The chart displays the different ways of transport
utilized to travel to work in one European City in 1960 , 1980 and 2000 .
Overall
car transportation showed the highest ascend in the year 2000 counter to bike usage which showed a massive decrease in the same year .
It is clearly seen that walking was the most known mode of transport during 1960 among 35% of the population of the city . Biking was Linking Words
also
common by just over 25% Linking Words
while
the rest of the individuals used buses and cars for transport. Bus use grew to just over 25% ,followed by car use
for transportby 25% in 1980 .
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However
, figures remained steady in a range of just below 20% to roughly over it . The year 2000 witnessed a massive decline in biking , Linking Words
on the other hand
, car use became the most common mode and rose to over 35% .Linking Words
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