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The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The given maps illustrate the design of the ground floor of a library in 2001 and its transformation in 2009.
Overall
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, the ground floor of the library was redesigned with extra kinds of books for the demand of people. In 2001, on the left side of the map, there were only three categories of bookshelves for self-help, history, and fiction.
However
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, these shelves were developed into six kinds of fields, with the addition of kitchen, economics, and law in 2009. On the top of the map, the fiction bookshelf was changed into
tables
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. and below these
tables
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 was the children's area which was added. In the middle of the floor, the single
tables
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 in 2001 were changed into long
tables
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 for more convenient sitting areas in 2009. The
Newspaper
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newspapers
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 and Periodicals were recreated into Films and DVDs on the right side, and computers were put in because of the requirement for internet access.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tables with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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